Hi and welcome to OSM. You've requested a review. The changes look good to me.
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שלום וברוכים הבאים. ביקשת בדיקה. השינויים נראים לי בסדר גמור. תודה על העריכה!

Also, you've named a forest "mogly and bar's forest". That doesn't sound like a public name.

Hi and welcome to OSM!
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Please note the name tag should only include proper names. "Shufersal" is a good name tag. "House" is not a good name tag. If you don't know the name of a feature, or if it doesn't have a name, it is best to keep it empty.

Deleted due to lack of response

Or maybe: "Body care mineral producing factory"

An objective description would be "Mineral producing factory".

Hi Bassam. Openstreetmap does not allow ads or SEO descriptions. Please use a completely objective description. Only describe what's on the ground and/or what can be ordered there.

Welcome to OSM and thank you for your edits at Belinson. Feel free to contact the Israeli community here: https://forum.openstreetmap.org/viewforum.php?id=33
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Israel-specific guidelines can be found at the Wiki page: osm.wiki/WikiProject_Israel

Why was the Wiki tag removed?

Hi, you've changed a neutral name into a slightly disputed name without discussing with the local community.

Hi. You've changed major relations without discussing with the local community. This should have been discussed first.

You changed "Rima" to "Prima" in English, but the name is still "rima" in other languages. Which one is correct?

Thanks for the report. I'll look into it

Hi. You shouldn't upload personal data to OpenStreetMap. This is a public map. Removed in osm.org/changeset/55213068

Please do not used shortened urls

See also: osm.org/changeset/55212798

References:
osm.org/changeset/55212603
osm.org/note/1223728
osm.org/note/1152594
osm.org/note/1188076

I've done this because people keep complaining, and occasionally editing these, apparently because they're seeing the Jewish structure rendering but not the muslim one or vice versa.
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Moving things a bit south should prevent this overlap.
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Since the Jewish temple is buried underground and its precise position is not really known, moving it slightly south shouldn't be a factual problem.

I've reverted to the way it was before. Allow me to explain further.
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Muslim structures:
Dome of the rock - osm.org/way/4709536
Dome of the chain - osm.org/way/45099263
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Jewish structures (believed to be buried beneath):
1. osm.org/node/4905269174
2. haHekhal osm.org/node/4905269173
3. Holy of holies: osm.org/node/5110685258
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Your now reverted edits have changed the Jewish structures and duplicated the dome of the chain.

This is an undiscussed edit that isn't factually correct. Could you explain the reason behind it? Prior to your edit, there were two POIs here, one Jewish, and one Muslim.